I CAN DEFINATELY RELATE ..
THIS POEM BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES ..!!

I loved it ..!! good job ..!! I'm definately adding you as a fav =D

Please return the fava and comment on my poems =)

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

I lvoe the rythem makes it more real..excelletn job..still ahve dat special touch i see.
keep it up bud.
lissa

You obviously understand depression but yet you're so open to say this is what depression does so are you actually greiving or playing off friends emotions?

You arent the only one. I can definately relate. The tic tac toe thing was an interesting point. It was very visual, which of coarse us a plus.

Eh ithink you should try to break out of your comfort zone in rhyme schemes. try not doing a poem wiht a abab cbcd or aabb ccdd rhyme scheme.

Overall i liked it. you diplayed alot of emotion and what you said is true.

xx3Lauren

i also loved the tictactoe thing. i say that. when im with my friends we call it emo tic tac toe. (we're just jokin cause actually 99% of us are/have been cutters)