This poem is so sad, i really liked it. great job shanik

I love this poem its so amazing by the way The Used rocks!

Wow..... it brings your mind back to earth and off your cloud of pride and for all those who have cut in the past it truly is a way to show that someone understands .... as your poem said, it brings back a memory... well this poem seems to bring back the memory to alot of people.

Its interesting how you can create the character that is emotion and indifferent all at the same time