So deep. the 5 vers sound so confused, but want. i like how u use the words:)

This is a very good poem. gave u 5.

Hey
Thank you for the comments on my poem. I appreciate critism as long as its constuctive so thanks again.

I love this poem. Its very sad and gets across the torment that you feel when you are losing someone but they are not quite gone. Well thats how i interpreted it. I thought it was great. Definate 5/5.

Kelly
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Was this the poem that I inspired you to write? Lol. Cuz if it is...its damn good. This is soooo sad. and i swear i would cry right now...if i wasn't at school. This was amazing. Keep it up!! Don't stop writing!! 5/5

-Poetess

This poem is among the best poems i have read of urs. the ryhimg was so natural and it wasn't forced. i love the emotion. and the title is so eye catching. i also loved the last verse!

hehe i am 12 i just love writing poems and over the years my vocab has grown. especially from reading other peoples poems.

once again Great write! keep writing so i can keep reading!

sophie:)

ps. thanx 4 the comments

Aww this is so sad! I can relate to this feeling, I felt like that with my kids dad for months before we broke up. I really like this poem but it made my eyes watery, anyways thank you for commenting on a few of my poems. I also voted a 5 on this one.