by Anonymous Oct 16, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Inspired by a picture I saw on DeviantARTdotcom. |
by geeeeee
"Gather around young children |
by brianna
Ok, im gonna be honest, i love it. strong opinions always make for excellent poems!! |
by stefanie
To get that from a picture is amazing... the rhyming was good but the flow was a little off because some lines were a little long but overall, it was good. |
by Kristina
I'm gonna be honest i don't really like this. it's confusing and i don't understand what it's really about. i don't know it might just be me. but this is not one of your best poems. |
by lashes
I love rhyming poem as it shows you've challenged youself and your rhyming is not bad at all,you have put alot of effort into your poem and the results shine as you've made it an interesting topic i love it |