Wow, I agree! Very dark indeed. Good choice of wording and the flow was very good too! :) I like this poem because it's different and I don't happen to come across poems like these all the time. You're an excellent writer! 5/5 Keep it up!

Steph

Yer i agree with them... very dark... u have a unique style in writting, very interesting and talented... keep it up

Wow, very dark indeed, but very well written. The flow was amazing I loved it. Good Job.

Ciao, Joe

5/5 This explains the world we are in. Some people are worthless and some arent. It moved me very much.

Wow!
This was excellent.
Truly amazing.
The imagery, flow, wording were all perfect.
One of my favourite poems on the site so far.

Very dark poem! Very well written! Had an excellent flow. This is an excellent read! Great imagery and wording. Keep them up! xx

I like this. This is sorta funny. It had alot of humor in it lol. 5/5
-Vino

It is usually hard for me to get into dark poems, but I must say that I didn't have a problem with this one. You chose the right place to put it, because this poem is very dark. You have a wonderful imagination, The flow of it was good and the rhyming was ok. I say this is a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

We watch our world get reduced to scribbles
and now the fires are beginning to melt our precious skin.
^^ I absolutely loved those lines. You had some amazing word choice in this and the descriptions of everything was absolutely wonderful... yet creepy.. lol. I could picture it all in my mind. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well. The last two lines were brilliant also and really stuck with me. Great job on this! 5/5

This is so dark, it's almost sick. Nice poetry but I am hoping you are not this sadistic.

Very interesting...but it's pretty good. good job

I like, the way you use your words, it is very?? intriging! thought some of it made me like a bit depressed but it was beautiful any-way!! 5/5!

Great job hunnie! you have a perfect 5.0 standings! I shall add another to that! *5/5*

~Ciao xx

Wow such a dark poem, great write and the imagery used was fantastic!!
5/5

Great poem.. i really love this one.. its got emotion.. great word choice.. great flow.. amazing!

I love rhyming poem as it shows you've challenged youself and your rhyming is not bad at all,you have put alot of effort into your poem and the results shine as you've made it an interesting topic i love it

I'm gonna be honest i don't really like this. it's confusing and i don't understand what it's really about. i don't know it might just be me. but this is not one of your best poems.

~Kristina

To get that from a picture is amazing... the rhyming was good but the flow was a little off because some lines were a little long but overall, it was good.

Ok, im gonna be honest, i love it. strong opinions always make for excellent poems!!

"Gather around young children
and put on a smiling face!
For today is a day of dying men
and raining radiation all over the place."

Its horrible to think of the attrocities that have occured in the world today. The title really caught my eye. It was definetly unique!