OMG! this poem almost had me in tears. There are a few sketchy spots that kill the flow, such as:

But she began to grow weak,
And her body couldn't take it anymore.
She started to grow sick,
And wasn't as strong as before.

should be:

But she began to grow weak,
she found she could take no more
soon she started to grow sick,
-- not as strong as before...

Other than a few glitches, this was a beautiful and captivating piece of modern art. A fine piece, i may add.

Great write. Keep writing:

5/5
~Stevie