Another great poem by a very great poet...........5/5

Wow, that is really really good. I'm not sure how to comment it, i just think that it is very well written, with excellent word choice. My favorite stanza is the seventh one, it stood out most to me. A great write. Keep it up. -=] 5/5

Tammie

Wow great I love this one and How I wish this is not untitled This poem have a great flow and rhythm also
Greatly written and Beautifully penned

XD Geneross

Kabs...=) u really impress me! i believe your talent very impressive u know? well keep up the good work and keep on writing coz i truly enjoyed.. musta pla life natin jan... hope u are ok well may god bless u always 5/5

sweet lig

OMG, I love this poem, it was way awesome, I love this paragraph.
"While others would tell- tales
of how a leaf has withered so soon.
I'd tell a story
of how a flower blooms..."
*5/5* for sure...
Karms.

Wow!!!!!!!!! This was a very deep, wonderful, emtional, poem. Every word of it translated a beautiful meaning. This poem to me is like on of Da vinci's paintings. It captures your mind and your heart. And emotion is seeping out of every word. Keep up the terriric work my great poet. I will be looking forward to reading more. 5/5

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Letty

I like this . THe word choice is really nice, and the emotions ... Wow . I love it .
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Nicely composed Free-style. Great vocab, imagery, and feelings. keep it up

Beautiful penned myfriend, within free verse you writing here, i liked the way how you describle them, so heartfelt emotions penned, awesome!

bert ~

Wow! Beautiful poem! Love the emotian included in the poem. And the choice of vocab is great!! A great poem alltogerther! Keep it up!! xx

As tears drips from my heart,
these eyes

As tears fall from my eyes,
this heart.

That's about the only change I would make here.

Good effort.