"You're the thought that starts each morning the conclusion to each day you are in all that I do and everything I say"
Such loving words indeed.Such a great insight into love.
"You're the smile on my face
the twinkle in my eye
the warmth inside my heart
the fullness in my life"
Another beautiful stanza.You word everything so beautifully allowing the reader to fully understand your feelings.
"You're the hand that's laced in mine and the coat upon my back
my friend, my love
my shoulder to lean on"
...Wow...I'm almost speechless.Such raw emotion in this stanza.Definately my favorite one.You know that tense feeling you get when you read something so true? It got me when I read this.It was,for lack of a better word, perfect.
"You're my silly, mature, caring, thoughtful, bright and honest guy the one who holds me tightly when I need to cry"
This brought to mind the warm fuzziness that love tends to shower people with.It was cute.
"You're the dimple in my cheek
the ever constant tingle in my soul
the voice that makes me weak the happiness of my life"
I LOVE THIS STANZA!!! Once again such raw emotion.You word your thoughts so well.
"You are all I've wanted
You are all I need
You are all I've dreamed of
You are all of this to me"
I love the " You are all of this to me" part of this stanza.So true are the feelings of love and few people can tell others about it with such detail.Your an awesome poet and I look forward to reading more. ;) A definate 5/5