Perfect Girl (Killed Herself Tonight)

by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast   Oct 16, 2006


She's a strong girl,
Yet your killing her inside.
She's a honest angel,
Yet every time she lied.

Just because she smiles,
And fiddles with her hair.
Doesn't mean everythings alright.
Doesn't mean everythings OK.

Every girl in school.
Wants to be Her.
Open your eyes,
It's all a blur.

Don't you see her tears?
And her almost-faded scars,
Perfect girl is depressed.
Perfect girl is behind bars.

Squeezing the razor,
She cut so bloody deep.
You think shes perfect,
While she feels cheap.

I guess shes a perfect girl.
I guess she always right.
Just so you f**king know,
Perfect girl killed herself tonight.

- PLEASE comment and tell me what you think. I'll return the fava ..!! -

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  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    Wow this is like WOW! I like this AOT 5/5 All the way!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ This was my favourite stanza: +.+

    I guess shes a perfect girl.
    I guess she always right.
    Just so you f**king know,
    Perfect girl killed herself tonight.

    +.+ Nice :) +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a kick ass poem I am wondering how it got less then a 5 ever but hey thats just my opinion. Keep up the kick ass writting.

  • 18 years ago

    by Blue xo

    Thruthfully
    omgosh so freaken good!
    I like the whole third person concept
    very creative

    --Violet =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jinx

    All I can say is wow.

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