Hey thanks for commenting on my poem,
luv your poem, its so sad Defiantly adding to my favourites

I like it.
very angry, very emotional.
(i dont mean 'emo' emotional)
I enjoyed it immensely.
Some rhythm was broken but no one is perfect as your poem states.

great work. strong message.

off to read a coupkle more

5/5

This is a powerful emotional poem 5/5 well done its well written and sad and i like it. keep writing

I guess shes a perfect girl.
I guess she always right.
Just so you f**king know,
Perfect girl killed herself tonight.

excellent stanza. I like the repetition of perfect girl in this poem, it really empthasizes the meaning. I identify with this in almost every where, except for the fact that I'm a guy. Everyone thinks that I'm great at everything, and that I'm just about perfect...but on the inside, I'm a bad kid. I've almost gotten arrested a few times, and I'm a druggie hahah.

If that hasn't scared you away and you have AIM, IM me, at Tripp5ive21.

Again, great poem :)

Wow... amazing! i loved it.
im not sure what it is, its just so REAL!
i loved it. 5/5

Hey hunny i know how you feel, great poem keep up the good work and if you ever need to talk im here for you. Please comment on some of my poems it would mean a lot. Again good job,
love cassie xx

Wow someone used to call me perfect. pity they never got a chnace to know me. anyway awesome poem 5/5

Thank you for your comment.
I really liked that poem. It wasent to long, yet wasent to short. It is amazing how you can feel compleatly alone, then read one of these poems and realise others are going through the exact same thing.
Great job

All I can say is wow.

Thruthfully
omgosh so freaken good!
I like the whole third person concept
very creative

--Violet =)

This is a kick ass poem I am wondering how it got less then a 5 ever but hey thats just my opinion. Keep up the kick ass writting.

+.+ This was my favourite stanza: +.+

I guess shes a perfect girl.
I guess she always right.
Just so you f**king know,
Perfect girl killed herself tonight.

+.+ Nice :) +.+

Wow this is like WOW! I like this AOT 5/5 All the way!!!