by Destiny Rain Oct 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She paints her eyes and lips black as night, to look at her is a painful sight. Scars on her arms and scars on her heart. Shes so broke I don't know where to start. Shes lost all those around her in one way or another, she had to grow up without a mother. Her only escape was drugs and booze, she uses to no extent because she thinks she has nothing to loose.With every drink or hit she looses tough with reality, but to her this is fine because she doesn't have to deal with it. Alone in her room she cries, as she paints her darkened eyes. |
by Tiffany
THIS POEM WAS AMAZING! SHORT AND SWEET ALL AT ONCE. I LOVED IT AND I COULDN'T BELIEVE WHEN I ACTUALLY SAW I WAS CRYING. LITERALLY, IT WAS VERY SAD BUT TRUE. SOME LIVE A LIFE LIKE THAT EVERYDAY! GREAT JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. |
by Ashlee
Wow...good flow! great poem! =] 5/5 |