On the Brink

by Cuddles   Oct 16, 2006


I'm standing
on the brink of sanity
teetering on the line
trying not to go insane

too much emotional pain

I'm fighting
to hold myself together
to stay in my right mind
to hold tight to my self control

though it's easier to let go

I'm trying
to hold on to something
that's barely even there
holding on to that tiny string of hope

so hard to try and cope

So I'm standing
on the brink of sanity
teetering on the line
wishing I could go numb from it all

lean left and just let myself fall

written 10-15-06

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great job! Such an unusual rhyme scheme but it worked great! I have one called Insanity. Lol Don't know if you'd like it or not, but it's similar to yours. Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Hey! that was an incredible poem, very powerfully written, great work! yep i posted another poem :) it was nasty seeing that poor horse, i love them too! anyway, hope ur ok, take care and keep up the fab writing!
    xxEmma xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Cuddles I really like the format and the way you arranged the rhymes.The flow was great and it was a most enjoyable read.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I love that last two lines. they are especially powerful. i also like the organization of the poem. its different and it calls attention to those lines. and besides that, it is really great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done. I like your write here Mary. A great job!!!

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