This piece is deep,

memories of weaknesses and fears surely hurts..

The words twig by twig falls into a well written poem, I think it is very naturally yet very effective for sure..

Wow, this is one of the best composed abstract life poems I've read for a long time. It deep, meaningful, yet gentle. Keep it up. By the way, how are you doing, haven't heard from you in a while.

Noni

Gurlie i miss your poems!!!!!!!! i love your work!
Amanda

Ok i suggest just one thing. you need to incorporate a few more words per line. just to give it more meaning and effect.

but this is still very very stunning.

5 from me. i will read more tomorrow.

David

I like dis.....

Beautifully written. I loved the way you illustrated how others tend to destroy our dreams.

5 / 5 !!! REALLY NICE