The beginning was a lil rocky but the last lines were amzing! they were sweet and beautiful. i really liked

Just remember me
Keep me near
Hold me tight
I don't want to lose you
Like I have now
So hold me near
Hold me tight
So I know Im in your heart

it was so beautiful. another great write. good job. 5/5

GREAT POEM SIS!

I LOVE YOU SIS.
ASHLA