by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Oct 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
**|I wrote this a while back also. I'm in school and I was looking through the school folder and I found this. Its about the Mississippi River. I think I did pretty good!|** |
by Goran Rahim
U r a great poet........ |
by Ashla
5/5 AGAIN SIS! YOUR GREAT! |
by bubbles
Very well done and structured. i can't think of a tittle but if i do ill be sure to tell. keep up the writting! |
Wow that was a powerful poem! i loved the short lines, it really added an emphasis on some of them which really struck me as amazing. ver well written. 5/5 |