Wow that was a powerful poem! i loved the short lines, it really added an emphasis on some of them which really struck me as amazing. ver well written. 5/5

Very well done and structured. i can't think of a tittle but if i do ill be sure to tell. keep up the writting!

5/5 AGAIN SIS! YOUR GREAT!

I LOVE YOU SIS!
ASHLA

U r a great poet........