Last Touch of Beauty

by Kim   Oct 16, 2006


As the snow melts
As the petals fall
As Lady Dusk dances across the sky

My eyes search for a trace
A single glimpse of your face
A final fading try

While the streams thaw
While the hawk screams
While laughing Time strolls its way

My heart is begging please
I collapse upon my knees
Anything for one more day

Then the trees sigh
Then the leaves turn
Then Fate weaves throughout the night

My soul's tears will never mend
As I spiral to my end
Failing beneath the paling light

Shimmering I weep, as you slowly die
Yet you smile so sweet, with our last goodbye

*these are more kinda lyrics

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow Kim, these really did seem like great lyrics! I'm sure Miguel can put together a perfect tune for this one. The flow and rhyme were wonderful. I adored the ending! It was so perfect, sad, yet relieving. Awesome job Kim!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Great write...funny thing is I was kinda singing the words in my head as I was reading and then I got down tothe bottom and I noticed you put that these are more like lyrics!! Way to go as I could already feel the beat!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    As the snow melts
    As the petals fall
    As Lady Dusk dances across the sky
    ^^
    Amazing opening stanza

    The imagery releases through your words evokes tears in this lady's eyes .

    Wonderfully writen Kim .
    Take care, Luanne

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Lyrics are poems in a different verse, so if they sound like lyrics (and this one does) there's hardly any difference. Excellent job on this. Wording is perfect and the mellifluous rhythm kind of takes you away. Beautiful

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