Lyrics are poems in a different verse, so if they sound like lyrics (and this one does) there's hardly any difference. Excellent job on this. Wording is perfect and the mellifluous rhythm kind of takes you away. Beautiful

As the snow melts
As the petals fall
As Lady Dusk dances across the sky
^^
Amazing opening stanza

The imagery releases through your words evokes tears in this lady's eyes .

Wonderfully writen Kim .
Take care, Luanne

Great write...funny thing is I was kinda singing the words in my head as I was reading and then I got down tothe bottom and I noticed you put that these are more like lyrics!! Way to go as I could already feel the beat!

Wow Kim, these really did seem like great lyrics! I'm sure Miguel can put together a perfect tune for this one. The flow and rhyme were wonderful. I adored the ending! It was so perfect, sad, yet relieving. Awesome job Kim!