I liked reading this poem because of the drugs mentioned in the poetry and how they can affect someone and the ones around them.

Wow, amazing poem. Your getting your message across very very well. The rhyming is absolutely genious. It was somewhat depressing to read, but your friend is lucky she's got someone like you. Tip for the future: if you even out the number of syllables for each line it flows a lot better. GREAT POEM!

Wow! Very powerful... This is one of my favorites of your poems!