Eh.. It's pretty good. Could use some punctuation fixes but. =)

This is so sad and despairing. 5/5 but u forget that there are ppl who care. me for one. keep writing and dont give up hope

You're not alone ... I'm here for you!

Dnt die... im ur frend.... im here 4 u... i always will b.. i will nevr walk away... i promise

*smiles* there a man tht i knoe to b JOey*lol i lik the name* he was sad and gloomy...but until he met me i taught him a lil and he pushed on his own..he now feels happiness beyond belief and is now better once again...as he got better all by himself he helped a lil damsel in distress..lol and saved her life too..wat an amazing guy is this..
this is the hero i knoe

Luv,
Gabrielle