by Ice Princess
Love it....! 5/5 |
Nice, I like the way you show painful emotion within your poetry. |
by xxmichaelxx
This is very good! keep it up! thankz for the comment |
by AnnieBananie
Wow. that was great. you are a good writer. keep up the good work. bye-bye |
by Naerwen
The imagery is one so melancholy, a staind rose, object of beauty obscurd but is still a rose. beautiful poem. |
by Karin
Very good emotion in this poem. Definitely 5/5. |
This a great poem. alot of beaty and sorrow in it. marvelous metaphors and such. loved the flow..very unique, i personally thought. and thanks for the comment on my poem "dreaming about foreveR" |
Wow. Very depressing. Kinda makes you take a look at yourself. I loved it. I can't wait to read more from you. Oh and this format is hard to read. The whiole paragraph thing. |
by john graver
Excellent job on this one! You make the reader feel what you are feeling! |
by john graver
Very nice write. I enjoyed it. |
This was very well written i wasnt sure about it at first but as i read it again and again it captivates me in different ways each time..GREAT job. this poem really screams at the reader and leaves a lasting impact.. |
Great work, I really liked it. |
by Montse
Wow.this is deep.i love the way u descriped it.so detail.made me feel like if i where seein her.n somehow reminds me of me...wierd... i love it |
by Quiet Storm
I really can relate to this poem. I liked a lot. |
by 117girrl
Wow, this is a great poem, i loved it! |
by Montse
Amazing,I love it. |
This poem is amazing, 5/5 |