Broken Image. [Villonnet]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 16, 2006


Broken Image.

As I look upon my porcelain face in the mirror - -
There is a broken image staring back at me,
Baby blue eyes talking of lullabies and goodbyes,
As my secrets fall to the floor within a silent tear.

My fingers trace along my expression so austere,
Etching out all of my lies and deceptions you believed.
Hesitantly I stare; at the barbie I have created,
As I look upon my porcelain face in the mirror.

Your bitter sweet promises shatter inside my ear,
As I stare upon your face in the picture on my wall,
Looking back at a person you thought you knew - -
As my secrets fall to the floor within a silent tear.

As I look upon my porcelain face in the mirror - -
I whisper good-bye to who you thought you knew,
As my secrets fall to the floor within a silent tear.

© Jenna Elphick
October 16, 2006.

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A Villonnet is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet. It has the Iambic Pentameter of both, but holds the four-stanza/line structure of the Sonnet, while utilizing the two-line rhyme nature of the Villanelle. The final stanza replaces the Sonnet couplet with a typical Villanelle tercet.

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- - I know that it's really confusing and weird. I am trying to break out of my writers block, I will more than likely be fixing it up. - -

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Good poem sweety. i love you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very thought provoking lines, Ive never attempted this challenging style of poetry yet you made it flow so easy..

    "As my secrets fall to the floor within a silent tear."

    -very thought provoking indeed..I wonder what youre secrets are..that drip tears in your eyes..

    Keep your high.

    God Bless!