The Dove of Freedom

by xxEvilAngelxx   Oct 16, 2006


Slow the dove,
Of freedom's wings.
Don't let him escape.
Enslave the body,
Control the mind.
That is his fate.
See him weaken,
Watch him die.
It's the road you choose to take.
If you can,
Go back in time,
Let free the body,
Release the mind.
You should have let the truth undrape.
You should have let the dove escape.

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  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I did enjoy it. It touched me in a way! Your a great writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Omg...like that was really beautifully written! my only suggestion is to put the first letter of the first word on the 10th line down in capital letters! just it looks odd. but nice poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, great job with this one! I can't find anything possibly wrong with it! Keep it up! :) 5/5

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    This poem is incredable!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Should i split each of the three long lines into two? or just the one in the middle... do you have any suggestions about HOW to shorten it.

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