Fallen

by Hanna   Oct 16, 2006


*PN: A poem I wrote about a friend's life. This is how i saw it. Please leave a comment on what you like or how I could improve. Thank you for your time. Enjoy!

One frightful night, corrupted life,
Soul ripped at the seams.
Her once true happiness been crushed,
Like her once true happy dreams.

A frown replaced her smile,
Cold and sunken were her eyes.
She hid her thoughts no longer,
No more hiding behind lies.

Her head held low and shadowed,
Her wrists tattooed with scars.
Her days spent in the darkness,
Her life fading like the stars.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Small but have a strong meaning. it flows well. gr8 job:)