Caught In The Undertow

by aDORKable x3   Oct 16, 2006


I'm caught up in your undertow
It's pulling me away so I'll never know

I'm swirling around and I feel like I'm dead
All thoughts of you spinning 'round in my head

Caught in the undertow, pulled away
What am I supposed to do or say?

Caught in a current that'll never let go
I can't believe you would ever stoop so low

Facing the waves as the splash onto me
Wondering how I can possibly be

Swimming around with my head in the water
Wondering how our love, you could slaughter

Caught in an undertow that will never let go
Don't lie to me and don't say no

The water's cold but your words are like ice
I stayed with you once, but I can't do it twice

Caught in the undertow that finally let go
Broken free from you, you will never grow

Freedom at last from the high rolling stakes
That's just one mistake you were willing to make

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  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    When are u gonna stop??? oh my gosh u are so good at writing poems and i exspecially like this one as well as your other poems!! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Great job! i like it! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Grrr logged me out when I tried to comment on this one lol.

    I loved the way You wrote this poem Hun, it was sad, but very well written.. well done 5/5 xx