by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Oct 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Hey, Mr.Jack . |
by Mommy And Me
Oh sweety. |
by aDORKable x3
What a beautiful poem hun! I loved the flow and ryhming was great!! the poem was written on a different topic, but it made it soo life~like! great job!! |
by Oscar
Wow it actually relates to a lot of people who go through that, great poem. |
+.+ It creates a story in your head. 5/5 +.+ |
by *Charisma*
Wow! That was a great idea for a poem. I liked your Mr. Jack twist on it. good job! Jpoet* |