In Sinners Sorrow

Oh my god...
Im adding you to my favourites...
thats like the third poem of yours i have read... and i loved them all.
And I usually only comment if i like the poem, or if i have said i would.

Great Job...
I Really liked this stanza;

Hateful Glares And Vicious Words
I Know Are Now In Order
And Though She Strikes Me With Her Words
I Wish She'd Hit Me Harder

TheJohnston;
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I like the ending. it got a good flow. keep writing:)

Nikki!!! Tehe It always exacts me when you post new things..I've had you on my faves forever and only from time to time to you post....
This is so ironic actually, and I'm not lieing, but I was thinking (just for an idea) on Friday that I should write a poem about the EXACT topic because it happens all the time by people who backstab best friends...not saying you did that.....I think its great you admit your mistake and ask for forgiveness which is why I won't judge you or anything...because it takes guts to admit you made a mistake and it takes a lot of guts to just apologize...I loved this poem and your rhymes! Excellent!
Love always,
Chelsey

Nikki dear, such a beautiful sad penned you potray here, this was simply but writing well with beautiful emotions....all the best for you, take care. bert ~

Beautilfully written, I hope all works out in the end with you and your friend. I've missed reading your writing, you are so talented. take care XXXXX
JL