I think your a little to needy.

Great poem, and yes with good love you want these....GP

Your poems are all great, you have a great talent, keep it up. 5/5

I thought this was really sweet and I can relate to it.
I loved the imagery and wording in here, it was a pleasure to read.

This is a very good poem, great flow and structure, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!!

Great poem, loved the structure, good flow and well written 5/5

In your loving umbras,
umbras=embrace

other than that this was well written, awesome flow, amazing word choice heartfelt strong emtions, What more could one ask for. 5/5