by LadyPearl Oct 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Green-eyed lizard can't you see |
Wow---Great write! There is so much emotion in it and the flow is so smooth---Very sad, but amazingly written. 5/5. Keep it up--- |
I love this poem! I ususally choose which stanzas I like the best but this poem was simply incredible! The only problem i found was on your last line it should be breathe* not breath :) |
This poem has much, much better flow. I absolutely love this line: |
by Tara Kay
Well done, i liked this one. keep it up |
by Karma Hope
Oh my gosh so amazing how you discribed the emotions, it flowed very well also, nice work... |