I love this poem! its how i was before i gave my heart to the lord, good job! 5/5

This poem definitely has a strong meaning, thats' probably the best part about it. Nice word choice, too... very creative!

Simply beautiful penned, so truth..For this world was privileged to the Light, And the way He left, He will reappear. thanks for sharing your beautiful penned, have a great day. best wishes.

Courage, Dear......Religion is from the top down.............Spirituality is from the Inside out....

Absolutely no one but you can convert any tiny atom of your longing heart.....Angels Will help....If you ask.......

Well-done poem...;-)