=)DARLING(=

by Sweet lig   Oct 17, 2006


I know and you know
From the very start
A million miles away
The distance between u and me

We may not get to see each other
As often as we like,
We may not get to hold our hands
All through the night

But deep in my HEART
I truly know,
You're the only one i love
And i wont let you go

I may not be a perfect girl
And i know what is true,
I'll always be the girl
That forever be true!

*****darling this is for you*****

anyways... i would like to thank you all for nice compliment of my poems i truly appreciate a lot! although some are negatives well this is ok, and its really my pleasure to hear that from u all. thanks and keep on reading!

god bless u all!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I found it really sweet.
    I enjoyed the flow and wording muchly, it really captured me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Another beautiful love poem by you. You are very good at writing love poems. Keep up the good work, 5/5

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    This was very nice... 5/5. I just had a suggestion for the last stanza; it might be more powerful if it were to be changed to this:
    "I may not be a perfect girl
    But i know what is true,
    I'll always be the girl
    That is forever true!"
    Other than that, excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Great poem... cute nice job good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Aww, short and sweet. A very nice poem to read :). Good work.