My World

by Gem   Oct 17, 2006


(A poem that does no justice to how i feel...)

You're everything that I could ever want
And it's so hard to put into words
But I'm going to give it my very best shot
Because you are my entire world

You're my moon, my sun, my earth and stars
You're the very air I breathe
And I promise you with all my heart
I'm never ever going to leave

I feel special and unique when you're around
You make me feel I'm somebody new
I could stare at you all through the day
It's like some sort of beautiful view

You're honestly never out of my thoughts
It could be classed as some sort of curse
But I really don't see it that way
Cos with me, you'll always come first

I can't imagine my life without you
You've become such a very big part
Everything of mine is yours
You own my soul, my love and my heart

I just really wish I could put into words
Exactly how much I care for you
And although I'm only repeating myself
I love you, I love you, I love you! ©

*Gem*

(Dedicated to my gorgeous fiance, Marcus. I love you xxx)

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is soooooo good! OMG! I love it! I'm trying to pursuade my mom to let me and my friend have a double date at my house. We're gonna rent a scary movie and curl up with our boys. I can't wait!
    xoxo

    P.S. I can totally relate!

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    That was so cute and sweet and beautiful!! a beautiful dedication! does he read your poems?? great job hun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very sweet. I love that your writings sound so natural and unforced!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Hey...i know what you mean, love just cant be put into words! but the poem still was quite well written! i'd give it a 4.5, but since you cant do that, i'll give it a 5! haha well, i'd really like you to read my poem 'friendship vs. love' if you could
    well thats it for now, keep writing girlie!

    ~emily@->-

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    I love this poem and i can relate to it. keep up the good work 5/5
    xoxoxox
    Jess