Oh and it shows how much you love him well done

Awww this poem is really really sweet gem,
and it does get across how you feel about him although it may not be able to fully describe it, but well done chick

wuvz ya
x x x x x

This was so cute! The flow was perfect and i really enjoyed it. 5/5

What a poem that would be... to fully express your feelings when your put ur heart out there where its most vulnerable and someone pertects it with there soul... I bet u could do it but it would be another 12am-12pm poem :P lol just play'in but i enjoyed readin this poem S2F

Peace
Anthony

Wow! but its true if you love someone no ammout of words can explain how you feel :) well done its a good try but sadly none of us can express it lol and it frustrates me lol :)

I love this poem and i can relate to it. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Hey...i know what you mean, love just cant be put into words! but the poem still was quite well written! i'd give it a 4.5, but since you cant do that, i'll give it a 5! haha well, i'd really like you to read my poem 'friendship vs. love' if you could
well thats it for now, keep writing girlie!

~emily@->-

Very sweet. I love that your writings sound so natural and unforced!
Charisma*

That was so cute and sweet and beautiful!! a beautiful dedication! does he read your poems?? great job hun xx

This is soooooo good! OMG! I love it! I'm trying to pursuade my mom to let me and my friend have a double date at my house. We're gonna rent a scary movie and curl up with our boys. I can't wait!
xoxo

P.S. I can totally relate!