Dancing

by LittleBlackRose   Oct 17, 2006


You are dancing through your life,
And you're shining like a star
Creating your own steps
'Cause that is who you are

You are turning a pirouette
And you take every chance
So you never have to stop
You have to dance your dance

But if you ever forget your steps
Or don't want to dance alone
Just ask, and your friends will be there
And you won't dance on your own

I've written this for a friend for her birthday, but I'm not completely satisfied, so if you have any advice.. thanks!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tine

    Hiii!
    fijn om eens iemand tegen te komen die ook nederlands spreekt! ;) I liked your poem!! one of the most beautiful expressive things, I believe, is dancing. You describe this so beautiful, keep it up ;)

    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ash

    I think your poem is execellent i would add one more stanza to give it a bit more body but otherwise it is perfect 10/10

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