Deaths hand

HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT.

luzaN

Hmm.. an intresting read. I like how youve used personification to describe death as a man. I like in the next two lines the repition of "there vanished" it was affective. I liked the alitteration of "shattered sight" both the repition and the alliteration helped the flow of it. SO yeah quite enjoyable read, but i thought it should of been longer and i thought you should of used some punctuation in some places. But still a good read, keep it up! xxx

Wow that was great and thank you for the comment :.) lol

love linda

Great poem and thanx for the comments on my poems.