Great poem it was kind of long, but i know the way you feel great job. 5/5

Amazing peace of write!!!
it was long but wow!!!
The love was shown in tha poem!
i liked it alot!
keep it up!

So many emotions, i couldnt take my eyes off the poem till i had finished reading, its both brilliant and beautiful

It`s a bit long, but it has emotion .
I like it . The feelings and all .
Keep it writin` .
..ღ__MiNDYY

A very wonderful poem.. beautifully written.. loved your choice of words and your discription of your feelings...
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

Wonderful poem, the loved showed! Was long but I guess you had alot of love to show. =]
It was beautifully written, good job!
Keep it up 5/5

Wow, that was amazing, but at one part it didn't quite flow as much. 5/5