by Kelly Oct 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Did you ever think it possible, |
by Cathy
Thank you Kelly for commenting on my poem this one is really good, I like the flow and the words you put into it, it sounds really deep. I feel like that towards the father of my kids if you read my poems most of them are about him some are good some are bad its just mixed emotions. Anyways 5/5 again great poem! |
by Krzysztof J
Love is the most beautifull, most uplifitng most amazing feeling a human being can ever hope to expierence but on the same note it is the most painfull :( I love this poem a LOT :)) |
Awesome poem that truly made the reader feel as though they were experiencing what you are writing about. (as most of us have!) |
by Gem
I can completely relate. |
by Bridgette
Aww.. this is such a sad and heartfelt write. I love the last stanza. You did an amazing job on it! 5/5 Keep it up! |