I really liked this poem. it was very clear and emotional. 5/5 :) if you could give some feedback on some of my work id appreciate it. thanks

I didnt expect the ending, i hope this isnt true and if so Im so sorry

The ending was sad but if that was real it takes a lot to write about something like that and to be able to put your emotions into words that others will understand

Yes the bird was a friend that was struggling and i helped her wth it, i also wrote my quote...to save someones beauty you must first save their soul

Aww.. this is such a sad and heartfelt write. I love the last stanza. You did an amazing job on it! 5/5 Keep it up!

I can completely relate.
Loved the emotion and pure heart
5/5
*Gem*

Awesome poem that truly made the reader feel as though they were experiencing what you are writing about. (as most of us have!)

keep it up!

Love is the most beautifull, most uplifitng most amazing feeling a human being can ever hope to expierence but on the same note it is the most painfull :( I love this poem a LOT :))

Thank you Kelly for commenting on my poem this one is really good, I like the flow and the words you put into it, it sounds really deep. I feel like that towards the father of my kids if you read my poems most of them are about him some are good some are bad its just mixed emotions. Anyways 5/5 again great poem!