Darkness

by David b   Oct 17, 2006


Stare into the darkness,
cant see no light,
seems like day has turned into night.

Stare into the darkness,
what can i see,
the devil looking back at me.

Stare into the darkness,
cant see the end,
is the real or just pretend.

Stare into the darkness,
hearing people scream,
is this my life or just a dream.

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  • 18 years ago

    by endless tears

    Wow this was good.
    short but good.
    you have some reall talient.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Well, it was ok. but i think you should put more. and well, it's kinda ok, just maybe, umm, practice more and be better. but i really like it. tell him that even tho u don't get 100 votes ur still trying. or/and just watever

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Sorry computer won't let me vote.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow! excellent...i totally loved it...5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I liked your poem very much! 5/5

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