The girl you don't see

by Simple Sensation   Oct 17, 2006


The girl you don't see:

She cries when alone,
Hiding the pain

She grabs the cigarette
Smokes, until it's an inch long

Rolls up her sleeve,
And the pain inside disappears.

Now she smiles,
"The pain lets me know, I am alive"

17 Oct 2006
Written by F A.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    OMG! I get what you're feeling, last night I was so distraught! I happen to hurt my thumb badly but it felt real and good to know that I still feel pain. It almost felt as though I deserved heartache because good things are hard to come by. This another great poem.

    Naima

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    I like the end statement, "The pain lets me know, I am alive"

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Its sooo sad :(

  • 18 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Do u do all his to know ur alive...

    ...umm my poem.. umm lets see.. when i have time ill put the whole poem up.. for now im busy for a few days sory...

    love this poem tho : )

  • 18 years ago

    by gabriela

    Wow. dark.

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