Comments : The girl you don't see

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    ^^ I meant burning not cutting. sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I like.. I like.. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow, a very powerful poem.

    Now she smiles,
    "The pain lets me know, I am alive"

    those lines are almost erie, i like it... nice work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by gabriela

    Wow. dark.

  • 18 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Do u do all his to know ur alive...

    ...umm my poem.. umm lets see.. when i have time ill put the whole poem up.. for now im busy for a few days sory...

    love this poem tho : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Its sooo sad :(

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    I like the end statement, "The pain lets me know, I am alive"

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    OMG! I get what you're feeling, last night I was so distraught! I happen to hurt my thumb badly but it felt real and good to know that I still feel pain. It almost felt as though I deserved heartache because good things are hard to come by. This another great poem.

    Naima