Wow! a lot of vocab i never heard of. but it makes perfect sense lol. keep it up!

Moly! All of your poems blow me away! This one almost made me cry - why? I do not know. It just made me think, and that is why I hate thinking darn you! Lol. But it was really good Darling.

"The nets been cast into the sea, that holds your troubled heart"

^^ Those lines were the ones that first clued me in to the meaning behind the poem, and I loved them.

"Shattered by mistrust and pain, tears fill the hollow eyes"

^^ And those ones, I just friggin loved. It was a description that blew me away. Your word choice was amazing.

5/5

-Jenna.