Hey Jessica. Thank you for the comment on my poems. Honestly I've only been writting for about a week, but ill let you know what I've found out so far. The best poems come from how your heart, put some feeling into it, and don't worry about rhyming so much. I mean, yeah it should rhyme a little, but not every line. Does that make sense? If you want to respond, e-mail me.

Hey this poem is realy good. i'm going through this with a guy named chris.... which you can see if you look at my most recent poems. good poem though