Me trying to be free...

by PassionatelyMarla   Oct 17, 2006


LOVE...?????

BOYFRIENDS...?????

LIFE...?????

PARENTS....?????

i walk the earth from sea to land, in search of true meaning that will be my redemption..

somebody please just show me, tell me where it may be.. where can i find my salvation..

i travel to the stars staring to the earth and all the people, what could it be all the things i see...

i feel like a clown trying to juggle the planets of my fate, trying to make me free..

going back to the minds of when i was young, i see smiles, presents, and i was free..

free from worries, free from love, free from all troubles that may be..

PLEASE JUST LET ME BE!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked your poem. Very good indeed. But I feel the structure of the poem could have been better. This is my personal opinion though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wolf

    Excellent display of emotions sweety , i can't help but give it a five !

    nice to see you alive and kicking ! ,it's been a while since i've been here

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Hey .. nice poem. I like your style. It is different and I dig it.
    Jennifer

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