I tried moving on

by steve   Oct 17, 2006


Gonna close my eyes and get some sleep,
into my head you once again creep,
go back in time to when we both longed,
and to each other we both belonged,
to a sacred sweet place,
where we both embrace,
smile together as both our eyes light,
cause we have yet to had our first fight,
too bad this reality is only a dream,
because alone in my house i silently scream,
don't know about you but the loneliness kills,
my house is so cold as the loneliness fills,
its a cold that a blanket cannot fix,
not with heartache in the mix,
cause i know what its like to hear you snore,
as i lay beside you and want nothing more,
the feeling of trust for you to pass out,
calmly beside me without a doubt,
it was such a feeling like none before,
it meant so much i cant ignore,
though you feel i walked away,
were a phone call away day after day,
i know you still feel the same as i feel,
or nothing you said was ever real,
i make you so happy I've heard you admit,
its amazing how well our lips used to fit,
oh well baby its starting to get late,
just don't ever forget that we were so great,
sweet dreams for you and sweet dreams for me,
the only place the sweetness may be...................

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yeah so sad...i can relate..wish u get over her and find the right one for u..

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aww this is really sweet. I really like your style of writing. Very nice job - it's easy to tell from your writing that everything is genuine and comes from the heart. Keep it up =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    So sad, so touching.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    It was so sweet yet so very sad.
    You did a wonderful job with the imagery and wording, and I thought it flowed really well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Thank you so much for the comments on my poems... omg i loved this poem!! it was so sweet and heartfelt, i really felt it deserved more than the vote it's gotten! You're very talented, and i look forward to reading some of your other writes.

    oh well baby its starting to get late,
    just don't ever forget that we were so great,
    sweet dreams for you and sweet dreams for me,
    the only place the sweetness may be

    that was totally my fav part!! loved those lines, they can be so true!