Great poem I liked the way you put it all together!

In the rain it seems like you can see perhaps a bit more clearly after all that might have gone wrong the rain washes away what might have been aonther day. nicely put

This poem is sad really but also brilliant. I loved it, you have captured how lonely the writer is and how helpless they feel to do anything about the longing! Amazing poem, really struck a chord. 5/5

Kelly
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This i really nice poem,,, i like the story yah! nicely written just keep on writing all what u feel great job

Great poem, so well written nice structre and flow, its a unforced rhythm... i loved it 5/5

Thank you so much for the comments on my poems... omg i loved this poem!! it was so sweet and heartfelt, i really felt it deserved more than the vote it's gotten! You're very talented, and i look forward to reading some of your other writes.

oh well baby its starting to get late,
just don't ever forget that we were so great,
sweet dreams for you and sweet dreams for me,
the only place the sweetness may be

that was totally my fav part!! loved those lines, they can be so true!

I loved this.
It was so sweet yet so very sad.
You did a wonderful job with the imagery and wording, and I thought it flowed really well.

So sad, so touching.

Aww this is really sweet. I really like your style of writing. Very nice job - it's easy to tell from your writing that everything is genuine and comes from the heart. Keep it up =)

Yeah so sad...i can relate..wish u get over her and find the right one for u..