Moor

by Syanra   Oct 17, 2006


[ before I start, just in case you don't know what a moor is, a Moor is almost like a waist land, nothing grows on it, it's pretty much a dead swamp, slightly depressing to see]

Moor, you are so long and bare
What is wrong moor?
Why are you displaying such gloominess
Why are you delaying?
It's not Fair you wont grow into a field of green
Wield the will to fill your empty land with life
Defeat the quick-sand moor
Conquer death
I wish you would become something beautiful.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great poem! I would go through and check your spelling though...

    Conquer
    Fair

    I don't know if there were others.

    Nice job though, keep it up!