Aww trippster it's so cute!! i love it! in each poem that u describe how u feel about her, i always wonder..."WHERE THE HECK ARE THE GUYS LIKE THAT AROUND HERE!?!?"

Wow, im speechless, your devotion for becky is litterally oosing out of your words, i love this poem i love your first stanza, its what caught my attention to continue to read. my guy is amazing but he isnt as deep as you, he only loves me with half of his heart, another girl occupies the empty space. i just wish he would love me with his whole heart, like i am in love with him, i hope you and becky have a happy realashonship. because most of us just wish he had your luck. anyways i have said enough,
XOXOX
Kamille
P.S. i wrote a new poem, its called Till the end of time, come check it out sometime.

Aww I can relate more then ever! I love it! lol its very descriptive and its nice how you use her name and exact dates. I really like how you say: "Like an epic sunrise in the early morning"

It portrays a clear image in my head, which of coarse is always a plus ;) And I feel the same way in my relationship.
Well im talking to you on messaanger now and i dont know what else to say.... Keep up the good work tripp!!! 5/5