Me And My Reflection.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 17, 2006


Me And My Reflection.

Crocodile tears streak down my wretched face,
As my ashen fingernails lightly trace,
Along my withering cheeks of porcelain,
Etching flaws out of my plastic barbie skin.

The rain trickles onto the window pane,
As I look upon my reflection in vain,
Secrets burn in my eyes of baby blue,
As my mouth tells the stories so untrue.

The shattered voices echo inside my head,
As I play back every lie I have ever said,
Wondering:between me and my reflection,
whom do you love in this imperfection?

© Jenna Elphick
October 17, 2006.

- - This one is bleh. But, comment and tell me how I can fix it. - -

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Wow sweety. this one totaly beats my poem with this titles

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I don't think this is "bleh" at all. I really like this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by ***searching for the one

    I think its excellent..
    ps youve given me alot of advice on discussion posts so thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    First of all, I don't think this is blah at all. It was very well written and holds the depth of questions. Keep it up.

    Great job
    Jeannie

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