by BrokenREALiTy Oct 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
With unspoken feelings, |
by kayla T
This is really good ! keep it up! |
by Taylor
That really reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, substituting the family rivalries for social stereotypes.. yep thats it in a nutshell. Also because it was tragic. Made me sad. I realize that poems that make me sad must be really really good or else I wouldn't feel anything. |
by LuvLyLynn
Wow!!! i love this one so much...its so trut to it's word and i know what it's like...I have nothing else to say but i love it.... :)...keep up the good work.... |
by Jared McCaw
I liked the poem, but I have never been a fan of rhyming patterns. I think they limit a poem to what they can rhyme, instead of what they can do to construct language. |
by monika
Hi, a great poem lots of emotion in it sounds a bit like romeo and juillet fanctastic! keep it up |